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posted April 24, 2019 02:10 PM            

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Relationtrip

As you see me,
I'm your gun
Pointing at the
Red blue sky
Wishing you a
Farewell cry

Why is that you
Keep on yelling,
Why won't you just
Stop rebelling?
I can't help it
But to sigh

When my groaning
Reaches your ear
I will whisper:
Have no fear
'Tis the law turns
On us, dear.
Better laughter our smile dyes,
Polishing our best goodbyes.

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posted April 24, 2019 06:03 PM            

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Love the title!

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posted April 25, 2019 06:59 AM            

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Thanks.

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posted April 30, 2019 12:05 AM            

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Reminds me generally of a political rally.
Yes, I like the title too.

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posted April 30, 2019 01:08 PM            

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posted May 17, 2019 11:50 AM            

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Originally posted by mirage29:
Reminds me generally of a political rally.
Yes, I like the title too.

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posted June 03, 2019 03:26 PM            

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Good stuff.

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posted June 23, 2019 09:01 AM            

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Bump!

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