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PrettyPisces
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posted July 06, 2011 04:27 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for PrettyPisces     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
On this beautiful night, the sky decides to drop the cold onto our laps in hopes that we use our senses to look inside ourselves to find our loved ones for warmth. Like spinning a top, My head turns in every direction and all I see around me are the comforting snowflakes that leave my fiery passion on ice. My pessimism keeps me wondering if I’m praying to the clouds or if there is something beyond? Right now it doesn’t matter. The only things that matter are the subjects of my prayer is;"THE ONE". I feel like the only human surrounded by walking, talking mannequins. I know he’s out there, but the search is becoming virtually impossible. It seems that every genuine person I meet speaks to me with out once mentioning their luggage. They’re the ones who speak venom with words of friendship and the ones whose hearts’ are shared with another. One person in particular says our friendship is made of a diamond necklace; So valuable but yet, can be lost so easily.He doesn’t realize that our relationship is like a caterpillar; As we bring an end to our friendship to start something more intimate, we will only make our connection flourish. The butterfly effect, I’m torn. I guess, it’s my fault I just want to try something new. Love with out condition. Devotion with out the hope of reciprocity. Because being around a bunch of people doesn’t mean Your happy. Your still empty inside. You've been lonely so long you can’t remember what happiness feels like. Your numb. I guess love doesn’t have a place in your life; And location is everything, Right?

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posted July 06, 2011 10:40 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for lalalinda     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
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