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Topic: My poem and what you think of it and what planet it reminds you of.
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MiaPluto unregistered
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posted August 27, 2014 02:28 AM
That's my poem:As you grow up you learn things better Know what to say and what to expect. You learnt from the mistakes Which you're ashamed of Act like you never did those mistakes But you keep them close For when you're alone, You remember them very well You share the good memories Even the special ones sometimes And the memories where It wasn't your fault But what about the things That you know very well That you never speak of? Yet I know there is something By the fear in your eyes And the uneasiness in your demeanor Do I provoke some special memories of yours? Is there something hidden in your mind That you fear to ever expose? We all try to hide something And show the others We all try to control what image we have We all are ashamed of some things There are some truths that we can't face That we can't accept. - See more at: http://allpoetry.com/poem/11631487--As-you-grow-up-you-learn-things-better---by-MimiV#sthash.EQtmWIah.dpuf I wrote this poem, thinking of a planet in mind. Guess what it is, and include your own thoughts about it, and what it reminds you of in terms of astrological psychology. Love, Mia. xx IP: Logged |
Mercurian Intellect Knowflake Posts: 3973 From: Vulcan & Mercury. Yes, I was born on both planets, somehow. Registered: Sep 2013
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posted August 27, 2014 03:26 AM
Nice poem, Mia I was initially thinking Jupiter, but then Pluto came to mind. So Jupiter and Pluto. But it's probably Pluto, as that is your favorite planet and it is even in your username, haha IP: Logged |
MiaPluto unregistered
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posted August 27, 2014 03:35 AM
quote: Originally posted by Mercurian Intellect: Nice poem, Mia I initially was thinking Jupiter, but then Pluto came to mind. So Jupiter and Pluto. But it's probably Pluto, as that is your favorite planet and it is even in your username, haha
Yes, I was thinking about Pluto when making his. About someone plutonian who can see right through someone's vulnerabilities. Also of Saturn, since is denotes fears and and bad experiences. And I didn't think about Jupiter while writing it, but hen I re-read it, I realized there was some Jupiter in it too! About the growth and learning part. c: Also, I was thinking about the 12th house, for it is the hidden things, that we hide from ourselves and others. Thank you so much for reading! xx ------------------ Mia x IP: Logged |
Mercurian Intellect Knowflake Posts: 3973 From: Vulcan & Mercury. Yes, I was born on both planets, somehow. Registered: Sep 2013
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posted August 27, 2014 03:47 AM
quote: Originally posted by MiaPluto: Yes, I was thinking about Pluto when making his. About someone plutonian who can see right through someone's vulnerabilities.Also of Saturn, since is denotes fears and and bad experiences. And I didn't think about Jupiter while writing it, but hen I re-read it, I realized there was some Jupiter in it too! About the growth and learning part. c: Also, I was thinking about the 12th house, for it is the hidden things, that we hide from ourselves and others. Thank you so much for reading! xx
Ah, yes. I was thinking of others like Neptune and the Moon, but I thought I'd point out two of the planets, as those seemed to come to mind the most. And I wasn't thinking of Saturn, nice. And I guess you thinking of the 12th House is the equivalent of me thinking of Neptune instead. Yeah, not exactly the same, but pretty much similar energies, as Neptune rules the 12th House. Yup, anytime, Mia. It was a nice poem and interesting idea to link it with Astrology as a certain planet's vibe. In fact, this inspired me to possibly do a poem in the future relating to a certain planet(s), so thanks for the inspiration, Mia And don't worry, I'll put down that you were the inspiration behind the idea if I decide to post a thread about it xx IP: Logged |
Doux Rêve Moderator Posts: 9168 From: Registered: Dec 2010
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posted August 27, 2014 08:56 AM
It really made me think of Virgo.IP: Logged |
MiaPluto unregistered
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posted August 27, 2014 05:02 PM
quote: Originally posted by Mercurian Intellect: Ah, yes. I was thinking of others like Neptune and the Moon, but I thought I'd point out two of the planets, as those seemed to come to mind the most. And I wasn't thinking of Saturn, nice. And I guess you thinking of the 12th House is the equivalent of me thinking of Neptune instead. Yeah, not exactly the same, but pretty much similar energies, as Neptune rules the 12th House.Yup, anytime, Mia. It was a nice poem and interesting idea to link it with Astrology as a certain planet's vibe. In fact, this inspired me to possibly do a poem in the future relating to a certain planet(s), so thanks for the inspiration, Mia And don't worry, I'll put down that you were the inspiration behind the idea if I decide to post a thread about it xx
Yes, Neptune and the 12th house are very similar. Also Neptune is past memories, and so it shows that too. I would love to see your poem! I think everyone should do poems and we should guess their astrological energies. Thank you very much! x ------------------ Mia x IP: Logged |
TensionEmpire Knowflake Posts: 184 From: Hamburg Registered: Sep 2014
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posted December 02, 2014 09:15 PM
Yup, when I read "provoke", scorpio popet up in my mind, and that was befor the spoyler. I just missed some rime, but i guess thats the style.Here is one of mine: "Oh Baby, we got everythink to waste Oh Baby, we just need a place" I did not think about a Planet, but what you guys think? Here is another one, a nice one in my opinion, but it is in portuguese. But there is Google Translator xD "Jovens revoltos se quebram na espera de uma paixao Cidades noturnas inteiras na espera de um apagao" I guess it is like this, I have it written down but not right here. This is for sure RevoltZ, so I guess Uranus opose Sun, Uranus Square Acs... IP: Logged |
Odette Moderator Posts: 4831 From: Registered: May 2012
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posted December 03, 2014 08:07 AM
I love the poem It made me think of Saturn, the passage of time, learning from mistakes, controlling our image and not completely opening up, triggering hidden memories - were you hinting at past life memories? It all sounds Saturnian to me.IP: Logged |
mamawolf Knowflake Posts: 156 From: the universe Registered: Aug 2012
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posted December 04, 2014 01:35 PM
Made me think of my Cap 8H stelliumBut yes, Saturn and Pluto IP: Logged | |