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Valus
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posted January 11, 2010 06:08 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Valus     Edit/Delete Message
The brain is a many-hissing tangle of serpents;
wise, half-wise, and contradicting one another.

The heart is a quiet plea;
a question which cannot be answered yet,
but patiently insists on being asked.

The body is a wanderer.
The soul is a dream.

Trees are windows onto natureworlds.
Rocks are doorways onto underworlds;
where slithering and creeping intentions evolve.

Here is a laboratory,
where experiment undermines experiment,
and wanting to know is an affliction
that only marks you out.

Now we see from the merest corner.

Now we stand in the center,
perspective in perspective,
worlds swarming all around.

Cough,
and you cough up a curiosity;
an idea, intrigue, or animal.

Tiny hairs along the vegetables.
Conspicuous is the smallest thing.

Werewolf angels adorn the passageways, from sign to sign,
where we peered over the shores and into the creatureful seas, --
only to return, with jangling necklaces of words, anxious to loudly undress,
and recover the nakedness of silence; beyond and before all experience.

Innocent, cultureless,
and strangely defensive of the purity that exists
in an ignorance which has become conscious, at least, of itself, --
we sought remote places of escape.

Where light moves independently of objects, in the open air.
Where men do not find, and insist on naming, us.

Where we refuse to be mirrors reflecting mirrors.

Where even wisdom is not wanted,
if it can only be hung like an anchor, or a cross,
around one's neck, and the necks of others.

Where children are left to be children;
to grow into new and original men.

And spirits are left to be spirits;
to incarnate according to their pleasure,
and not our own.

Where nothing is holier, and everything is holy.

Where the heart is an inscrutable law unto itself,
and the mind, a quaint and compelling distraction.

Where nothing means anything for very long,
but meaning is attributed by the heart;
and significance wanes in the abstract,
even as it wanes in sense.

In heaven, as it is on earth.


©2010 Valus

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koiflower
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posted January 11, 2010 09:26 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for koiflower     Edit/Delete Message
You really need to put a copyright onto your work, Valus

I enjoyed reading this prose.

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Valus
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posted January 11, 2010 10:03 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Valus     Edit/Delete Message

Thanks.

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SunChild
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posted January 12, 2010 05:40 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for SunChild     Edit/Delete Message
Anyone with the sense to appreciate this is incredibly blessed.

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Yin
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posted January 12, 2010 08:12 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Yin     Edit/Delete Message
Amen, SunChild.

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Valus
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posted January 12, 2010 10:47 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Valus     Edit/Delete Message
Awww, thank you.

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Spanky Butler
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posted January 13, 2010 12:42 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Spanky Butler     Edit/Delete Message
Now this is a truly beautiful piece Valus.

The world needs more words such as these. Any chance of having this one published?


Thanks for sharing it with us.

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Valus
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posted January 13, 2010 01:26 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Valus     Edit/Delete Message

Thanks, Spanks.
And you're welcome.
My standards are very high.
I'm not sure what I'll publish,
at least, under my own name,
or the name of "Valus".

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Valus
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posted January 13, 2010 02:47 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Valus     Edit/Delete Message

A man who judges thinks he can enforce the laws of righteousness by sacrificing the very first among them.

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Yin
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posted January 13, 2010 08:56 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Yin     Edit/Delete Message
You own your style and form. Readers appreciate that.
They will hunt down every piece that you can
spare regardless of the value you assign to it now.

Write.

I am so proud of you.

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Valus
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posted January 13, 2010 03:26 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Valus     Edit/Delete Message

haha, awww...

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shura
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posted January 13, 2010 04:25 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for shura     Edit/Delete Message
this is very good

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