Posts: 717
From: Belfast, Ireland
Registered: Jul 2002

posted July 23, 2002 08:35 AM         

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Hi wrote this poem and when I wrote it, it was like automatic writing, it just seemed to flow free of itself.
But I so wanted to share it with someone who would understand the thoughts of it.
So I thought I'd write it here.
Here goes...
The windy, winding road
Stretches out like a vein that meets other veins
The blood rushes through like wind
As if it breathes it's own life.
For there is no life in blood as just itself
but in it there is life to self what it is within.
As the wind, winds, through as action,
The proof of it's life is the reaction
of those it gives life to.
And so
Without the other there is none.
My hand is holding the rod.
It stretches.
But I cannot without my hand
hold onto another
Unless another holds onto me.
I cannot hold without another.
The road conjoins, links together
in it's journey,
the passengers of life.
For without the passengers it is not a road to walk upon.
But a line says here is here and here is there.
The road stretches like my hand.
And no life breathes upon it but another.
For without those to breathe the life
there is no breath.
And without the breath,
there is no life.
What do u think.
A pretty roundabout way of sayin we all need each other, hehe
Thought I'd share that with ya.

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From: Mexico city, Mexico
Registered: Mar 2002

posted July 23, 2002 11:44 AM         

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Beautiful poem Quinnie...

...pretty misteryous...

+BE FIGHT+

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From: Columbus, GA USA
Registered: Nov 2000

posted August 04, 2002 08:06 PM         

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To the top!

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"Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark

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From: Plainfield, IN
Registered: Sep 2001

posted August 05, 2002 07:24 PM         

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I believe the future is simply the past, entered through another gate.
-Pinero-

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From: Columbus, GA USA
Registered: Nov 2000

posted November 03, 2002 10:27 PM         

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"Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark

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From: Second America
Registered: Nov 2000

posted November 30, 2002 10:34 AM         

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