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Bernadette1216
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posted August 21, 2002 08:54 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Bernadette1216     Edit/Delete Message
i love poetry...i wrote this in November..

Magick Carpet Ride

where do your obsessions lie?
so deep in the perils of your mind
i have tried to seek you
but i can't seem to reach you
as you pull so far
away from me now
and i don't know just what to do
for all i see is bleeding you
right beneath your step
you want yourself to help
but that is fraud and you know why
you can't break free, this love to buy
another day, you waste away
thinking of me, what did you say?
i'm drawn to you, you can't explain
then tell me this, as i move terrain
to be with you, one minute still
the time will linger, yes it will
my love to bring, my heart to bear
it's just so easy, yet unfair
waiting, careful, watch your back
she's coming after you
in mourners black
she digs her claws in, yes she does
i'll fight for you, but realize
that once i win, there's no goodbyes
only hello's to brand new days
and love explored in brand new ways
move aside, you fearful soul
i'll work my magick and then you'll know
my love is higher, magick carpet ride

Copyright Amanda Patton
111601

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Enrique
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From: Mexico city, Mexico
Registered: Mar 2002

posted August 21, 2002 11:58 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Enrique     Edit/Delete Message
Thanks for sharing the poem, it made me think a lot...

and WELCOME!

+BE FIGHT+ +BE LIGHT+ +BE REVOLUTION+

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peace_keeper
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From: canada
Registered: Jul 2002

posted August 22, 2002 09:56 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for peace_keeper     Edit/Delete Message
Awsome poem Bernadette!!
I give it two thumbs up

Peace and Love to You
and all the Knowflakes!

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Bernadette1216
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posted August 22, 2002 10:01 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Bernadette1216     Edit/Delete Message
THANKS!!!

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sweetpeas
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From: Plainfield, IN
Registered: Sep 2001

posted August 22, 2002 05:51 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for sweetpeas     Edit/Delete Message

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No act of kindness, no matter how small, is ever wasted. -Aesop-

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Randall
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posted November 03, 2002 10:13 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message

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"Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark

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