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Topic: Revelation
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AmberVonSchriek
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posted November 18, 2002 02:07 PM
She was waiting forever in the hall
against the glass wall
Somehow they believed she was dead
but in her head
she knew they wouldn't really see herHe stumbled on her unexpectedly
his feet dragging heavily
Caught like an animal in the oncoming light
he turned to take flight
where he planned to go he didn't care or know "I've changed," he cried, "that's it, I'm gone
It's been too long"
The clouds in his eyes lamenting his age
His body his cage
Imagine if only faith is not forgotten," she said, "and I will help you remember"
She's only the sender
Reminding him what he used to be
His own words gently
Bringing back the brilliance of revelation ------------------
it's the start of the season ..the dawning is near ..the age of fish comes announcing the news of the year ..there's an open horizon before us ..there is a rainbow under my eyes ..we shall be one ..under the sun ..right here in the power of the light IP: Logged |
SnowWhite
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From: Los Angeles, CA
Registered: Sep 2002
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posted November 18, 2002 09:23 PM
I love that so much.------------------
The scent of love is a strange mixture of springtime flowers and
spilled wine on sweaty skin. It cannot be reproduced in the lab, unless
it's a lab with a very liberal dress-code. IP: Logged |
AmberVonSchriek
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posted November 18, 2002 09:37 PM
thank you  It's inspired by the dream I had last weekIP: Logged |
taj
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posted November 18, 2002 10:09 PM
the starts reads like the introduction of a novel...until you read further..then you get to see that somehow everything is just right. it has that effect.
i like the notion that is shared.
it's sort of esoteric. "His own words gently
Bringing back the brilliance of revelation" thanks for sharing, amber. 
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AmberVonSchriek
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posted November 19, 2002 06:58 PM
thank you   IP: Logged |
dafremen
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posted November 19, 2002 08:56 PM
Would a moment in time be worth living?
Would a tender memory, time passed, be as lovely without the poet's lines?
Perhaps, but let's not find out just yet, this poet's words alone justify the moment.8) Daf IP: Logged |
dafremen
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posted November 19, 2002 08:57 PM
In other words, very nice. IP: Logged |
AmberVonSchriek
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posted November 20, 2002 09:03 PM
thank you very much !!IP: Logged |
Carlo
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From: Second America
Registered: Nov 2000
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posted November 30, 2002 10:28 AM
It's really excellent!IP: Logged |
AmberVonSchriek
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posted November 30, 2002 02:19 PM
thank you! ------------------
we'll be together till the end of time and when you smile, red rose, it's just like blue sunshine...
oh, we're ascending and we'll never die cause when we kiss, red rose, we're changing 6 to 9 ...it's revolution time when 6 turns into 9 IP: Logged |
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