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From: Purple Fields, USA
Registered: Jun 2002

posted October 09, 2003 09:44 PM         

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I wanted to share this with all of you. I feel so happy and want to spread it I am not sure how this will be formated. I hope you like it

“ Love, Rob”

You said it and I felt it, for so Long – After
More like Before when I couldn’t share – I Cared
But now I feel a little bit Free
And When - can Never Matter again
Even if only – I’ve found the Perfect Friend

I want to Give you something, my Dear
I want to Share with you my Long Hidden Tears
To Show you what’s been Growing
So that you can make it Disappear
I want you to be the Only, and I will Answer Ever
Any question or concern, with regard to my discern

Deep and Lonely Tucked Away
Never Given on that Horrible Day
Too Afraid it could never go Away
or Maybe that he would just Play
Play with Words and Sing his phrases
Of how he’s changed….and can I Brave this?

But what you Said and how you Meant it
Everything Simple and True – to You
Will Always find a way Out
So this is me – that Cappy Girl
Telling You – With You – I Feel the World

JJ

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From: Canada
Registered: Apr 2003

posted October 10, 2003 01:09 AM         

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Ok, who's the Leo that inspired the Cappy Girl? And who's Rob? Is that you, Metoo? That's a very beautiful poem. You must have tickled her heart strings

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From: Sydney, Australia. Cancer Sun.....Gemini Moon.....Aqua Rising
Registered: Aug 2003

posted October 10, 2003 02:06 AM         

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BEAUTIFUL!!!!

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From: Purple Fields, USA
Registered: Jun 2002

posted October 10, 2003 09:08 AM         

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Sorry - guess I wasn't clear about that. Rob is the Leo, and I (the author) am the Cappy Girl It gets better....we have only "known" each other for 2 weeks. I am sure I will have more to share soon...thanks for your comments metoo

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posted October 10, 2003 09:15 AM         

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Hey, metoo... Feel free to come on down to Yellow Wax and the Ants (the forum I moderate). It's a creativity forum, for poetry and the like, and I'd think you'd be right at home since you are an expressive person.

Love and Light!

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-K
"Most people love with restraint
As if they were someday to hate
We hated gently, carefully
As if we were someday to love"-Venus Trines at Midnight

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posted October 10, 2003 09:46 AM         

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Thank you for sharing the beautiful love nature of Capricorn.

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From: Land O Love
Registered: Oct 2003

posted October 24, 2003 12:54 PM         

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well written metoo.

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From: Ontario Canada
Registered: Jun 2005

posted October 24, 2003 01:34 PM         

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Grayheart? That is cryptic, and rather sad.
Intriguing as hell too!!!! You are new, She is somewhat new too- Does that mean you are the subject?

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posted October 24, 2003 02:09 PM         

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Uh Oh.....check out Soul Unions...truly grayheart's heart is not well.

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posted October 24, 2003 05:32 PM         

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Truly it is not..........
I feel like the loser, in the dark corner, watching everyone dance.....what's going on? I am a good secret keeper!!!! But also intensely interested in hearing them if they need to be shared! ( wink wink, nudge nudge.....c'mon, I wanna hear, I wanna hear!)

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From: Land O Love
Registered: Oct 2003

posted October 24, 2003 07:27 PM         

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hidden now is the story and ever so shall it remain until such time as it is ready to be told.

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posted October 25, 2003 02:21 AM         

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Wow, deep.........I was just playing, didn't mean to make light of it. Wasn't intended as such. I was just wondering if you were the subject of the poem, and didn't like it...... or if you didn't like it for other reasons..... In that you WEREN'T the subject. C'mon, you can't drop something like that out and not at least expect someone to be curious. None of my business, really, but it is in front of my eyes. I don't need to know though. I hope everything works out how it should.
* me thinks some creative editing has been done!*

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posted October 25, 2003 06:27 PM         

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I think I know who Grayheart is....he is Yoda.

I'm sorry, I love the way you write grayheart. It appeals to the hopeless romantic in all of us Saggies. I also think this alignment, with so many planets in Scorpio is sending a vibe to my Pluto conjunct Ascendent, Jupiter and Neptune. At any rate...you write so beautifully.

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