Posts: 3944
From: Calm Blue Ocean, Calm Blue Ocean
Registered: Jun 2003

posted January 30, 2005 06:05 AM         

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Heres a cheezy poem I wrote, I don't usually rhyme and tned to be overly abstract, so i decided to write a more simple/rhythmic poem....enjoy

I'm a wise man in training,
I don't need no lies
Tell me the truth
And I'll hear your cries

I can see your soul
If you let it be seen
It's shining and pure
And naturally clean

We are all reflections
Of god's great glory
Your pains and woes
A univeral story

Remember this rhyme
It will serve you well
There is no heaven
And there is no hell

Forgive yourself
Love yourself free
The secret of life
Is learning to be

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From: The Little River Indian Reservation
Registered: Jan 2002

posted January 30, 2005 04:04 PM         

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I like your poem, Blue Roamer....

Love,
Rainbow

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From: Hopelessly lost........
Registered: Jun 2003

posted January 30, 2005 06:44 PM         

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Awesome

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From: Vancouver USA
Registered: May 2004

posted January 30, 2005 07:06 PM         

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Nice .

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From: *
Registered: Jun 2004

posted January 30, 2005 08:25 PM         

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I love it!

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From: Ontario Canada
Registered: Jun 2005

posted January 31, 2005 01:04 AM         

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FAB!
Go on over to Yellow Wax and the Ants one day.

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