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Virgo-AriesArtist | Cloudy overloaded senses tactile waves just make me pensive Space invaded, boundaries toed Where's the clarity on this muddy road? Speak without circles, breathe without jest Bring light to intentions, let my heart rest The yo-yo is numbing, I find the air thick where am I led now, and will I be sick? Seriously stunned caught between fear and fun The chord just grows strong as we unriddle our song ------------------ Check out my poetry! <3 https://www.facebook.com/KKaneskyPoet |
pippastrelle | Excellent write, beautifully written |
secondhandspine | I really enjoyed your poem. Wonderful imagery and it made me think. Thank you! |
Swift Freeze | Beautiful, thank you. - Chris ------------------ Learn lots. Don't judge. Laugh for no reason. Be nice. Seek Happiness. Follow your dreams. |
Virgo-AriesArtist | Thank you pippastrelle, secondhandspine, and Swift Freeze. I am pleased this one touched you ------------------ Check out my poetry! <3 https://www.facebook.com/KKaneskyPoet |
mirage29 | I like how the rhythm at the end of the phrase acts like the swing of an old-fashioned carriage-return [now, Enter button]... This has a cool rhythmic beating to it... Thankyou for your depth! Thanks V-AA |
Virgo-AriesArtist | quote: Originally posted by mirage29: I like how the rhythm at the end of the phrase acts like the swing of an old-fashioned carriage-return [now, Enter button]... This has a cool rhythmic beating to it... Thankyou for your depth! Thanks V-AA
Thank you, mirage. I have been trying to figure out with several of my recent poems a very perplexing acquaintance, and it seems to get murkier/cloudier as I go...poetry is the only way I muddle through
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charmainec | Good poem. "Speak without circles.." makes me think of mind games or someone trying to be mysteriousThe title "Tag" suits the poem perfectly. |
Virgo-AriesArtist | quote: Originally posted by charmainec: Good poem. "Speak without circles.." makes me think of mind games or someone [b] trying to be mysteriousThe title "Tag" suits the poem perfectly. [/B]
Thank you, Miss Charm I do believe the person in question *does* intend to be mysterious...think Gemini Rising, LOL I am pleased you agree with the title ------------------ Check out my poetry! <3 https://www.facebook.com/KKaneskyPoet |