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T O P I C R E V I E WIced8AceI am who I say you say I amA broken mirrorTell us again what you wanted to hearThe bickering of an ageless fearCaught desperately in betweenReflecting what exactly?The direct youth forgottenMake no mistakesYour reflections rottenLips parted by dustContemplative swingYounger than us In the mood for nothingTiresome ideasI can't listen anyhow Where are you leaning?Out the window Strong Motive, Red ResolveSpilled miles hit the pavement of a forgotten trip, pictured on the road, movable but slow.Seated in acoustic thunder, stole the key to sunrise as night cloaks your gownSquall'd into town, smooth cruise as the boat shakes your groundSo you take offForeign flights close your home and you lose your sumThe dress, a dead dream from a dear husbandDisclaimer: The two poems are not connectedthequeenHad me lost..this is so eternal sort of feeling..i could feel the tears of love and feeling of belongingness..so so so dear..like waiting for someone to turn around and see you in the darkest hour, where there is no one else but the two of you…Loved it.. Randall Iced8Ace@thequeen Your interpretation is one of the reasons why I like writing the way I do. Thank you for enjoying! @Randall Thanks!mirage29Wow again, Iced8Ace! so much living loss, so much living lost: ... so alive!Ayeletwonderful. both poems are beautiful. I personally love the second onebetter, but that's just a matter of feeling.Iced8AceThank you, mirage I enjoyed the quote you addedThe second one is very dear to me, thanks Ayelet! PearltyBoth are a stunning reception of various deeply driven emotions. Enjoyed reading them. mirage29 Iced8AceThank you for enjoying them, Pearlty CharmaineLoved it.Iced8AceThank you Charmaine CharmaineYou're welcome!
A broken mirrorTell us again what you wanted to hearThe bickering of an ageless fearCaught desperately in betweenReflecting what exactly?The direct youth forgottenMake no mistakesYour reflections rottenLips parted by dustContemplative swingYounger than us In the mood for nothingTiresome ideasI can't listen anyhow Where are you leaning?Out the window
Strong Motive, Red Resolve
Spilled miles hit the pavement of a forgotten trip, pictured on the road, movable but slow.Seated in acoustic thunder, stole the key to sunrise as night cloaks your gownSquall'd into town, smooth cruise as the boat shakes your groundSo you take offForeign flights close your home and you lose your sumThe dress, a dead dream from a dear husband
Disclaimer: The two poems are not connected
Loved it..
@Randall Thanks!
so much living loss, so much living lost: ... so alive!
The second one is very dear to me, thanks Ayelet!
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