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T O P I C R E V I E WPink AngelHi, im new to this forum... and have never tried poetry as such, so i just started some 15 minutes ago :dPlease dont laugh at me I'm just 18 years old here goes....My life was like a flowerJust waiting to bloomI was so untouchedUntil you came my wayThen everything changedI knew it was loveBecause when you leftMy heart used to cryOh why oh whyDo you give me such pain?And yet, I still love youWhy do you play this game?I know that we are meant to beAnd know that forever we will betogether...somedayMy life was like a cloudSo light and greyIt was full of hope for a bright sunny dayBut the day you stepped into my skyMy cloud went dryi started to cry.. tears of happiness and sadness tooI couldnt control my emotions, I didnt know ehat to doYou showed me what life was meant to beBut how can you disappear without a trace?How can that be?This angel wipes her bright pink noseAnd tries to hide, but knows it showsShe feels so helpless and lame in loveHow can you do this to me, o lord aboveYou said that everyones always happy in the endBut im not happySo is this the end?Virgo-AriesArtistSweet one, Pink Angel...!And no, no one would ever laugh at such an honest and touching expression of heartfelt words.You are welcome to share whatever words strike your mind, all future poetic expressions... We are an open-minded, and caring group. Stick around and you will be glad you did.Love and Lite ,a fellow poet and your friendly moderator -------------------K"Most people love with restraintAs if they were someday to hateWe hated gently, carefullyAs if we were someday to love"-Venus Trines at MidnightdafremenThat was very heartfelt and sincere. Thanks for sharing.DafOh and welcome to Lindaland!purplezenpink angel, that is a very nice poem. Pink AngelThanks for all the encouragement! Hi virgo! Hi daf!Hey purple!! Randall ------------------"Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca ClarkAphroditeLovely
My life was like a flowerJust waiting to bloomI was so untouchedUntil you came my wayThen everything changedI knew it was loveBecause when you leftMy heart used to cryOh why oh whyDo you give me such pain?And yet, I still love youWhy do you play this game?I know that we are meant to beAnd know that forever we will betogether...someday
My life was like a cloudSo light and greyIt was full of hope for a bright sunny dayBut the day you stepped into my skyMy cloud went dryi started to cry.. tears of happiness and sadness tooI couldnt control my emotions, I didnt know ehat to doYou showed me what life was meant to beBut how can you disappear without a trace?How can that be?
This angel wipes her bright pink noseAnd tries to hide, but knows it showsShe feels so helpless and lame in loveHow can you do this to me, o lord aboveYou said that everyones always happy in the endBut im not happySo is this the end?
-------------------K"Most people love with restraintAs if they were someday to hateWe hated gently, carefullyAs if we were someday to love"-Venus Trines at Midnight
Daf
Oh and welcome to Lindaland!
------------------"Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark
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