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T O P I C R E V I E WEternal BlueI'll stayBecause you are hereAnd you'll never betrayMe, I try to believeYou guide me through it allThrough the changing seasonsYou're so great, and I'm so small'Hold on,' you say, and you give me the reasonsI live in the dark, you bring the lightWhen I thirst, you are the springWhen things go wrong, you make them rightI live in silence, but then you singThis is a perfect placeYou try to take away me sorrowMaybe there's no need to be afraidAs long as you're here, I won't goEternal Blue aquawhat's this for?Eternal BlueI don't really know what you meant, aqua. Did you mean my poem or my reply? I just figured this work was not good enough, although I posted it here anyway. Eternal BlueAnd the title does seem odd. What I was trying to say was "if this person remained here, this would be a perfect place for me to be". Just an idea.CharlotteAwww, I understood what you were trying to say... It was sweet! you are talented.I think Aqua meant the red faces.Eternal BlueA BIG thank you, Charlotte... aquaoh i am so sorry for making u wait.yes charlotte got it.the poem is really a good one eternal why do u feel its not?Eternal BlueThanks aqua! What should I say...? Should I analyse it? When I wrote it down I really poured it out from my heart but I just thought it lacked sophistication...anyway, I was sharing my feeling, which I believe is the point Sheaa OleinI don't understand why you were putting yourself down Eternal.It's beautiful.. it is clear it came from the heart It expresses what it does in the best way it can, and the title perfectly reflects that. I've related several heart wrenching experiences to it already ------------------"We see everything through a glass, darkly. Sometimes we can peer through the glass and catch a glimpse of what is on the other side. If we were to polish the glass clean, we'd see much more. But then we would no longer see ourselves." From 'Deep Quotes'Eternal BlueThank you so much Sheaa Olein! I don't know what to say...all I can say is I'm very happy that I've received such positive responses, especially your feedback aqua Eternal Blue
the poem is really a good one eternal why do u feel its not?
It's beautiful.. it is clear it came from the heart It expresses what it does in the best way it can, and the title perfectly reflects that. I've related several heart wrenching experiences to it already
------------------"We see everything through a glass, darkly. Sometimes we can peer through the glass and catch a glimpse of what is on the other side. If we were to polish the glass clean, we'd see much more. But then we would no longer see ourselves." From 'Deep Quotes'
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