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T O P I C R E V I E WpixelpixieThis thrustthis coming movementis beyond hip flexorsor body silkit lies in the womb of energyan action picturein a sea of stillsyet within the momentumwhere I fall like honeythoughts sticky thickand sealed in the tummythe invasion of the sensesis comfort yetand comfort spentin interludesof solitudethis fortitudeand attitudestrength in numbersand in depththis book is not quite written yetI forgetto stop writing and just to bethough it calls to meso this is a pausea waiting in the wading poolfeet wet begetdroplets of moisture travelling up to be seenagainanewin youIt doesn't matter how you see mecomfort in regularitylifelove's ambiguitystopped in the heart foldas it flutters on wingsnewly formeda simple touch would wipe away ability to flyand simple words wipe away the tears I often cryit is my lesson though learning makes me bleedin placeas I sitenergy thrustingmy memory entrustingfaith costs too much these daysI've spoken through the loving hazemet it lighter and heavy stilltrespassed through my living willwalked into my chest to resta light and dark forever guessedleo_on_fire*claps* BRAVA!!! I love it pix...luuuuurve it!!------------------Live your life without regret, don't be someone they forget. Your heart is not yours to keep, it's yours to give...UnknownSheaa OleinYou know Pix, my first impression of this is birth. It has sad undertones though.. almost mournful yet so beautiful. Every time I read your poetry / spiralled words.. I try and describe what it is exactly that I love.. but I'm usually absolutely facinated. I think it's the detailed way you describe moments.. and how you make regular human senses come alive.. the way you pay attention to detail to take the reader through the moment with you.Other than that, I put it down to my Leo Desc quote:..beyond hip flexorsor body silkit lies in the womb of energyan action picturein a sea of stillsyet within the momentumwhere I fall like honey..
------------------Live your life without regret, don't be someone they forget. Your heart is not yours to keep, it's yours to give...
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I think it's the detailed way you describe moments.. and how you make regular human senses come alive.. the way you pay attention to detail to take the reader through the moment with you.
Other than that, I put it down to my Leo Desc
quote:..beyond hip flexorsor body silkit lies in the womb of energyan action picturein a sea of stillsyet within the momentumwhere I fall like honey..
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