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T O P I C R E V I E WFaithWhipped this up spontaneously as a response to Derrick C. Brown's A Finger, Two Dots, then Me. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jidS7djf0yM It applies to all the poetry I love.1Vivid is a love songClarity a kissFor specks of comprehensionI've lingered on like this.2Speech can knit completionLanguage bridging riftsSpirit loops a circuitAnd I feel the planet shift.3Poignancy one-ups itselfThe song plays through the spheresA music that's electric, secretangels in our ears. 4You've consecrated closenessWith these rudiments of soundA simple phrase that wanders longAnd thus my heart is found. A little corny but so am I.RandallAwww...------------------"Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca ClarkVirgo-AriesArtist LOVE this, Faith! So poignant and lyrical, very beautiful to read.Thanks so much for sharing ------------------Check out my poetry! <3 https://www.facebook.com/KKaneskyPoet FaithThanks!Swift FreezeAll 4 verses are beautiful.------------------Learn lots. Don't judge. Laugh for no reason. Be nice. Seek Happiness. Follow your dreams.pippastrelleI agree, beautiful verses!! Excellent! Faith Glad it made sense!Here is the really excellent short film for "A Finger, Two Dots, then Me." I didn't post it at first because the video kept stalling on me:AwesomenessSwift FreezeThat is a beautiful poem and Derrick Brown is an outstanding reader, and writer. Thank you for sharing, I really connected with that, thank you.------------------Learn lots. Don't judge. Laugh for no reason. Be nice. Seek Happiness. Follow your dreams.
It applies to all the poetry I love.
1Vivid is a love songClarity a kissFor specks of comprehensionI've lingered on like this.
2Speech can knit completionLanguage bridging riftsSpirit loops a circuitAnd I feel the planet shift.
3Poignancy one-ups itselfThe song plays through the spheresA music that's electric, secretangels in our ears.
4You've consecrated closenessWith these rudiments of soundA simple phrase that wanders longAnd thus my heart is found.
A little corny but so am I.
------------------"Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark
LOVE this, Faith! So poignant and lyrical, very beautiful to read.
Thanks so much for sharing
------------------Check out my poetry! <3
https://www.facebook.com/KKaneskyPoet
------------------Learn lots. Don't judge. Laugh for no reason. Be nice. Seek Happiness. Follow your dreams.
Here is the really excellent short film for "A Finger, Two Dots, then Me."
I didn't post it at first because the video kept stalling on me:
Awesomeness
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