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virgolotus | Eyes shot at water fishes carelessly swim squeezed my guts and then I faltered my guts intact chest starts to crack patience is virture-- so they say illusion is enemy oblivious mind intertwined blankly with the clear sky a turn of fate a chance of fake plastic figure full with false hope belief is key open the gates to the sea fish for those lost eyes that linger in the blue I found left right is sunken deep in desire --stop the search Faith is watching*I honestly don't know what this is (in a way) but I'm posting it just for entertainment and maybe make you ponder, maybe, if interested. |
virgolotus | When reading this what comes to mind? |
Swift Freeze | Is this directed at me? - Chris ------------------ Learn lots. Don't judge. Laugh for no reason. Be nice. Seek Happiness. Follow your dreams. |
virgolotus | No! Ahahaha that name just came to mind when I wrote this. |
mirage29 | Leonard Cohen, "Anthem" [9:33] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_e39UmEnqY8 Ring the bells that still can ring Forget your perfect offering There is a crack, a crack in everything That's how the light gets in. --LEONARD COHEN http://www.famouspoetsandpoems.com/poets/leonard_cohen/poems/7054 |
virgolotus | quote: Originally posted by mirage29: There is a crack, a crack in everything That's how the light gets in.
Wow, you're perfect for sharing this. |
mirage29 | What a funny-peculiar mood you're in, virgolotus! Your genius is percolating! h-no: Strange, in a really cool kind of way... Enjoying you! The Doors - People Are Strange (Jim Morrison) [2:13] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GJY8jJkDoMY |
virgolotus | I've been trying to be more open on the site, not just lurk. Thank you, mir And I love Jim! Ugh, stop having such perfect taste! |
charmainec | It makes me think of false hope. Things we are taught to believe but it's all a lie. That we are the ones to decide what works for. Just my opinion.------------------ quote: Remember, love can conquer the influences of the planets....It can even eliminate karma.
Linda Goodman |
virgolotus | quote: Originally posted by charmainec: It makes me think of false hope. Things we are taught to believe but it's all a lie. That we are the ones to decide what works for. Just my opinion.
This resonates with what was going through my mind while writing this. |
charmainec | Oops, the sentence was supposed to be "what works for us" Good poem. ------------------ quote: Remember, love can conquer the influences of the planets....It can even eliminate karma.
Linda Goodman |