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T O P I C R E V I E WAyeletSnow goes without sayingSnapping at your tongue with a swiftness so suddenAnd I rememberWhat a display of coldness I have witnessedin your sweet yet foreign disarray of mannersBordering on madnessI can still feel your pain, as acute as mineYou are living again, revolving in fearAround my absenceAnd love is still as nearYet love is still as near PearltyYour poem delves toward raw feelings which speaks volumes..I liked the short form simplicity yet in meaning the emotional complexity.. AyeletThank you for your readingRandall RandallLove the imagery. AyeletThanks Randall!RandallYou're welcome.PearltyHad to come back and read this over again, I love this. Reminds me of heartfelt Yeats poetry, yet modernly flared. RandallMissing the cold air right about now!RandallHigh 90s here.RandallYes, modernly flared.mirage29 RandallMore!mirage29Such a passionate, strong, mature romantic sense about this poem, Ayelet... I can imagine it! AyeletThank you so much Mirage!
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