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T O P I C R E V I E WLF DXHello there fellas, I just found this place and I want to share some of the lyrics and poems I do in english; I'm still very far from what I saw in here, because it's not my first language, but I've been writing in english for almost 6 years and I feel more comfortable writing in english than in my native language (Spanish), I don't know, it feels easier to meYou're quite a darlingWith your masks and charadesYou can text me the bible, and every sin you madeYou can sell me your problems, and say you’ve got no cureAs your eyes say other things that can’t be toldWell babe, I ain’t gonna be the healer no moreI feel the pain and remorse, but ain’t enough to meTell someone else your half-cooked guiltsI've held enough and got myself sufferingFrom what I felt it was realI’ve believed in you as I watch the reelsOf times that were good for givingAs your deeds make lovers get lost in the rainWell babe, I’m just another man who felt in vainClose from the dreams and far from the truthSomeone has to walk on and try to get toughI’ve spend 40 days in the desert running dryI’ve tried my best as the sea can’t be seenI’ve went to the top and straight to the bottomI’ve eaten bugs and drank some **** As the sun keeps burning the wilderness seedsWell babe, I’m just a storytellerWho gets into chilly nights full of gloomCause the southern lights are hard to findYou’ve said you’ve went to a place of doomWhere the sludge and grind did a number to your psycheAnd you fall helplessly with the devil in disguiseYou gave it all with nothing to loseAs the ghoul enchants you for pleasure while he plays with ****** Well babe, I am myself a characterFrom many tales of joy and painI’ve written all of’em to not get insaneDon’t send me gifts I can’t repayDon’t send me words I can’t respondDon’t give me hopes I can’t provideAnd don’t make give it another tryAs I’m feeling you could change your mindWell Babe, I ain’t the one you really needIt’s been a while since I felt some peace being at your sideYou made your choice, you knew the rules, but you weren’t wiseAs the clock of mine keeps tickingAnd through the years passing going fasterI still feel the ache and the love for youWith the memories of happiness and sorrowAs you went with the devil I called my friendWell Babe, you who treated me like your kinHow our bond too far gone once was so narrowMaybe it was a mere illusion from the flaming moonI'm actually making a record now which I want to present it later this year, It's the typical "Confessional Singer-Songwriter" record, like Neil Young in Harvest, with some blues and rock, I'm doing it because I want to get liberated from some deep emotions I have, and this is the only way I feel I can do it.Let's see where this goes.Cheers AyeletVery straight-forward. Interesting. Sad.LF DXThank you, I've seen your poems, they are amazing I must say, very deep and emotional.I'm still learning to make better lyrics, without making them too straightfoward, I think lyrics should be more flexible, not too personal, except when it's necessary. CheersRandallInteresting.saronnaits beautifulmirage29Welcome LF DX! ... I love it! especially the opening first six lines. Grabbed me right away... Did you ever youtube any of your work?You say you're doing it in the style of Neil Young in Harvest...(music) Old Man, & Heart of Gold (Neil Young, 1998, Harvest) [7:09] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zBFGkUmVkAs hmmmm. LF? I wonder how it would sound if you went a bit 'darker' in your style? 'Neil Young' has a lighter voice... How's yours? For me, I can imagine these lyrics fitting a gritty more gritty style like 'Leonard Cohen' type? .... I guess it would depend on your age, and/or the timbre of your voice?Whatever way, DF? ~~ Make it yours! Wishing you great successes. And welcome once again to our creative expressions corner. Glad you've joined us! (music) Waiting For The Miracle To Come (Leonard Cohen) lyrics [7:39] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Di-etRm4cN8 Randall AyeletThank you very much, LF DX. I myself don't see any problem with being straightforward. It's a matter of style, though one can be versatile and write in many different ways. I don't think there is one "right" way to write. LF DXThank you very much to everyone (Y), being around this place will be pretty good, and looking foward to see the creativity from you as well.@mirage 29, I do have some songs on youtube, solo and with my band Paper Jam which have some other names before xDhttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Wj6g16jo87o&list=PL36rVB2NxsXaNc-LqIpulgV3eTE4vYZ1EI also have my soundcloud channel which I have demos from my band and my upcoming recordhttps://soundcloud.com/luisfer-torresFor being a 23 year old kiddo I have a pretty raspy baritone voice.I look to do it in the Harvest style but in reality it's more like Blood on the Tracks, or in my case a Layla and Other Assorted Love Songs by Derek & the Dominoes, the darkness, longing and deep pain involved in the songs.And when the record it's out I'll put it out here with a bandcamp link, cause I'll release it online first, it cost a lot of money to make it physical.Ayelet, yes indeed, but I just want to change my style after this period ends, I feel exhausted after what I've experienced, which I put it out into the lyrics, and I just want to change myself, it's necessary.Cheers.mirage29thanks for sharingPearltyGlad you've decided to share your poems/lyrics here. Looking forward to reading more. I like this set of lyrics, it's not repetetive like some lyrics out there can be. This is rather expressive, invigorating, and as mentioned above interesting. Randall quote:Originally posted by Pearlty:Glad you've decided to share your poems/lyrics here. Looking forward to reading more. I like this set of lyrics, it's not repetetive like some lyrics out there can be. This is rather expressive, invigorating, and as mentioned above interesting.
You're quite a darlingWith your masks and charadesYou can text me the bible, and every sin you madeYou can sell me your problems, and say you’ve got no cureAs your eyes say other things that can’t be toldWell babe, I ain’t gonna be the healer no moreI feel the pain and remorse, but ain’t enough to meTell someone else your half-cooked guilts
I've held enough and got myself sufferingFrom what I felt it was realI’ve believed in you as I watch the reelsOf times that were good for givingAs your deeds make lovers get lost in the rainWell babe, I’m just another man who felt in vainClose from the dreams and far from the truthSomeone has to walk on and try to get tough
I’ve spend 40 days in the desert running dryI’ve tried my best as the sea can’t be seenI’ve went to the top and straight to the bottomI’ve eaten bugs and drank some **** As the sun keeps burning the wilderness seedsWell babe, I’m just a storytellerWho gets into chilly nights full of gloomCause the southern lights are hard to find
You’ve said you’ve went to a place of doomWhere the sludge and grind did a number to your psycheAnd you fall helplessly with the devil in disguiseYou gave it all with nothing to loseAs the ghoul enchants you for pleasure while he plays with ****** Well babe, I am myself a characterFrom many tales of joy and painI’ve written all of’em to not get insane
Don’t send me gifts I can’t repayDon’t send me words I can’t respondDon’t give me hopes I can’t provideAnd don’t make give it another tryAs I’m feeling you could change your mindWell Babe, I ain’t the one you really needIt’s been a while since I felt some peace being at your sideYou made your choice, you knew the rules, but you weren’t wise
As the clock of mine keeps tickingAnd through the years passing going fasterI still feel the ache and the love for youWith the memories of happiness and sorrowAs you went with the devil I called my friendWell Babe, you who treated me like your kinHow our bond too far gone once was so narrowMaybe it was a mere illusion from the flaming moon
I'm actually making a record now which I want to present it later this year, It's the typical "Confessional Singer-Songwriter" record, like Neil Young in Harvest, with some blues and rock, I'm doing it because I want to get liberated from some deep emotions I have, and this is the only way I feel I can do it.
Let's see where this goes.
Cheers
I'm still learning to make better lyrics, without making them too straightfoward, I think lyrics should be more flexible, not too personal, except when it's necessary.
I love it! especially the opening first six lines. Grabbed me right away...
Did you ever youtube any of your work?
You say you're doing it in the style of Neil Young in Harvest...
(music) Old Man, & Heart of Gold (Neil Young, 1998, Harvest) [7:09] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zBFGkUmVkAs
hmmmm. LF? I wonder how it would sound if you went a bit 'darker' in your style?
'Neil Young' has a lighter voice... How's yours?
For me, I can imagine these lyrics fitting a gritty more gritty style like 'Leonard Cohen' type? .... I guess it would depend on your age, and/or the timbre of your voice?
Whatever way, DF? ~~ Make it yours! Wishing you great successes. And welcome once again to our creative expressions corner. Glad you've joined us!
(music) Waiting For The Miracle To Come (Leonard Cohen) lyrics [7:39] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Di-etRm4cN8
@mirage 29, I do have some songs on youtube, solo and with my band Paper Jam which have some other names before xD
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Wj6g16jo87o&list=PL36rVB2NxsXaNc-LqIpulgV3eTE4vYZ1E
I also have my soundcloud channel which I have demos from my band and my upcoming recordhttps://soundcloud.com/luisfer-torres
For being a 23 year old kiddo I have a pretty raspy baritone voice.
I look to do it in the Harvest style but in reality it's more like Blood on the Tracks, or in my case a Layla and Other Assorted Love Songs by Derek & the Dominoes, the darkness, longing and deep pain involved in the songs.
And when the record it's out I'll put it out here with a bandcamp link, cause I'll release it online first, it cost a lot of money to make it physical.
Ayelet, yes indeed, but I just want to change my style after this period ends, I feel exhausted after what I've experienced, which I put it out into the lyrics, and I just want to change myself, it's necessary.
Cheers.
quote:Originally posted by Pearlty:Glad you've decided to share your poems/lyrics here. Looking forward to reading more. I like this set of lyrics, it's not repetetive like some lyrics out there can be. This is rather expressive, invigorating, and as mentioned above interesting.
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