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T O P I C R E V I E WthequeenTell Me,Making me feel bad, Does it make you feel good?,Going around in circles, Walking where instead I should,Deceiving me to the core, And distantly smiling,Where you hold your fist, With your anger boiling,Why are you so far away, When I am standing so close,I gave you love, Why this hatred you chose,Punching the wall, Till your hands bleed out,Holding me in your anger, Till I speak my whereabout,I wish you gave me, What i gave you,My heart, soul and my lonely truth,I'll see you walk by, Till you return tonight,You can't live as I cant, Burning in this fight…AyeletThis one sounds like a love rap poem. You assert yourself confronting your love. And even though there is a bitter tone to this poem, it cannot end quite yet, or it is more or less eternal, since he keeps coming back. thequeenLol. Now that I read it appears to be a rap. Good one Ayelet and thanks for reading. Maybe there is a little Eminem in me lol.mirage29I read it, and you know how I tend to spiritualize each poem. I love your work.For me tonight, at first it evoked a sense of rejection and cruelty. There's the ever-living sadness and suffering that comes from feeling stuck-and-alive, in a world with little or no sense of pleasure from living. Only the constant pressing, pressing. Persisting. And yet, there's also a whiff of something deliciously provocative. It comes to ME... and Is NOT dangerous, but the wrestling of a fulfillment of desire.[And humorously, for everybody's sake, we call out 'crop-failure' to words spoken that want to manifest OUT of sync. I call CANCEL-CANCEL-CANCEL to any kind of negative energies surrounding anybody's situation right now. Only Safety, Peace, and Pleasant moments and dreams come to you now.]So anyways.... And OF COURSE, things come to me in songs.This may be way-far from your usual (and my usual) musical selection. But this is the one I have as a sense tonight.It can be applied 'spiritually' OR 'romantically'.... But I DO always feel that there is romance in the center of one who hears, seeks, and follows Spirit. Like Kriyananda's Flute-poem describes. (My other posts.) Your Call, I can't resist! (music) Lead Me On (Conway Twitty, Loretta Lynn) [2:30] *(see note below) mirage29(Just saying, there's something creepish~weird in the cosmic-vibe right now. The above was NOT an 'invitation' ... ewww. I think I'll take that url down for tonight and right now. ~sorry)thequeenThank you for reading mirage and your valuable input. There seems something strong and provocative about the way you analysed my poetry. I liked especially your short prayer for everyone. Never-mind you taking down the song, anything negative isn't welcome right mirage29^ That's right.... So Much Love to you T.Q.I've enjoyed your work sooo much.Thank you for sharing your life with us.Have A Happy and Prosperous New Year 2016 thequeen quote:Originally posted by mirage29:^ That's right.... So Much Love to you T.Q.I've enjoyed your work sooo much.Thank you for sharing your life with us.Have A Happy and Prosperous New Year 2016 Same to you mirage Have a blast in New Year PearltyTouchingly melancholy, yet such a keen sense of honesty in feeling.
Making me feel bad, Does it make you feel good?,Going around in circles, Walking where instead I should,Deceiving me to the core, And distantly smiling,Where you hold your fist, With your anger boiling,Why are you so far away, When I am standing so close,I gave you love, Why this hatred you chose,Punching the wall, Till your hands bleed out,Holding me in your anger, Till I speak my whereabout,I wish you gave me, What i gave you,My heart, soul and my lonely truth,I'll see you walk by, Till you return tonight,You can't live as I cant, Burning in this fight…
For me tonight, at first it evoked a sense of rejection and cruelty. There's the ever-living sadness and suffering that comes from feeling stuck-and-alive, in a world with little or no sense of pleasure from living. Only the constant pressing, pressing. Persisting.
And yet, there's also a whiff of something deliciously provocative. It comes to ME... and Is NOT dangerous, but the wrestling of a fulfillment of desire.
[And humorously, for everybody's sake, we call out 'crop-failure' to words spoken that want to manifest OUT of sync. I call CANCEL-CANCEL-CANCEL to any kind of negative energies surrounding anybody's situation right now. Only Safety, Peace, and Pleasant moments and dreams come to you now.]
So anyways.... And OF COURSE, things come to me in songs.
This may be way-far from your usual (and my usual) musical selection. But this is the one I have as a sense tonight.
It can be applied 'spiritually' OR 'romantically'.... But I DO always feel that there is romance in the center of one who hears, seeks, and follows Spirit.
Like Kriyananda's Flute-poem describes. (My other posts.) Your Call, I can't resist!
(music) Lead Me On (Conway Twitty, Loretta Lynn) [2:30] *(see note below)
quote:Originally posted by mirage29:^ That's right.... So Much Love to you T.Q.I've enjoyed your work sooo much.Thank you for sharing your life with us.Have A Happy and Prosperous New Year 2016
Same to you mirage Have a blast in New Year
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