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T O P I C R E V I E WLF DXYou, madam, the eternal humorist,The enemy of the absolute,You have made me an artistOf damnation and distressSo cold, yet fragile as thin iceI’m caught by your spellOf mortal blissMadam LilithEyes I dare not meet in dreamsIn death's dream kingdomEyes that haunts youIn the underworld’s realms They glance, they seekNothing but animal lustI am your puppet of sexMadam LilithLady of silencesYour wicked ways are evilI shall run from your presenceCause death is your mandateDark rose of forgetfulnessGiver of lovesicknessI am yours as my blood flowsMadam LilithI am yoursMadam LilithRandallWow!PearltyThis has a really cool wordy tone to it, and would sound amazing read aloud and orated for others. LF DXI used some verses from some TS Eliot poems, I'm doing the Bob Dylan thing of using verses from others and using them into my songs and poems, I'm in a overpowered creative state, like never before.PearltyYou keep building on that creativity, and you'll get where you want to go. thequeenwell crafted. loved the depth and also sarcasm i suppose if it's in there...LF DXThere's no sarcasm in this song, it's about the emotions I'm feeling towards a woman, powerful emotions that I barely control at this point, and the only way to convey them is through poems and songs.The lady in question is the first... woman I had a "deep" connection.thequeenMy bad. It's a powerful display of emotions, passionate..mirage29Well!, the asteroid god of hung caught trapped and cornered, conjuncts the sister of devotion ON your Part of Fortune! haha, and hot hot hot. Go fer it! I loved this. Oh, and what Pearlty said about orating your poems?? What a COOL idea! Why not experiment with a hot dramatic passionate reading of your work, breathing it into a microphone like you were telling this into our ears, or the ears of your lover...? Yeah! A youtube of you dressed and drenched in sweat. Blacks, some velvet blue-violet light enhancements, a spotlight coming from overhead. A bit of smoke in the air. It's dark... camera from around belly high and away from you ~4 feet away? Sometimes you look down into the camera, other times closing your eyes and tipping that head back, hair damp, drips with a bit of wetness.You might record your voice speaking with distant background of tones, or instrumental. But your voice would be primary. Love it!!!Imagine a Professor Snape kind of image from Harry Potter movies... Standing at microphone. http://harrypotter.wikia.com/wiki/Severus_Snape (music) I Put A Spell On You (Annie Lennox, Luigi Angeloni performs) [3:33] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4h0vRCTUbBU Look at the background and scene with David Cook's performance... and he did a gut-version of this song.(music) Billy Jean (David Cook, Am.Idol audition) [4:50] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GZGvgj_y-Ao With this style of authenticity and intimacy....(music) My Little Valentine (Alice Fredenham, Britain's Got Talent 2013) [3:17] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CPm9x8i5c_Y (music) I Put A Spell On You (The Voice, audition, Joe Maye) [5:27] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ApJ0UPR5eqE I hope we see you in some kind of entertainment audition some day.... LF DXI recite poems with some friends I've met in a literary workshop, but they are in spanish, but most of then don't know how deep are some of my stuff in english... I could record this poem later and post here. But this one will be a song for my heavy rock band, that's what's on my mind.Interesting points: What do you thing of a connection that has her pluto square my moon exact, her lilith opposite my venus exact, my lilith conjuncts her eros almost exact, my juno opposite her venus exact, her valentine trines my scorpio stellium on close aspect, and her juno conjuncts my jupiter exact, and her mars conjuncts my venus?.... That's already a lot to handle with the virgo woman... and it's quite a thing to me.Ayelet A very impressive poem.
Eyes I dare not meet in dreamsIn death's dream kingdomEyes that haunts youIn the underworld’s realms They glance, they seekNothing but animal lustI am your puppet of sexMadam Lilith
Lady of silencesYour wicked ways are evilI shall run from your presenceCause death is your mandateDark rose of forgetfulnessGiver of lovesicknessI am yours as my blood flowsMadam Lilith
I am yoursMadam Lilith
The lady in question is the first... woman I had a "deep" connection.
Go fer it! I loved this. Oh, and what Pearlty said about orating your poems?? What a COOL idea! Why not experiment with a hot dramatic passionate reading of your work, breathing it into a microphone like you were telling this into our ears, or the ears of your lover...?
Yeah! A youtube of you dressed and drenched in sweat. Blacks, some velvet blue-violet light enhancements, a spotlight coming from overhead. A bit of smoke in the air. It's dark... camera from around belly high and away from you ~4 feet away? Sometimes you look down into the camera, other times closing your eyes and tipping that head back, hair damp, drips with a bit of wetness.
You might record your voice speaking with distant background of tones, or instrumental. But your voice would be primary.
Love it!!!
Imagine a Professor Snape kind of image from Harry Potter movies... Standing at microphone. http://harrypotter.wikia.com/wiki/Severus_Snape
(music) I Put A Spell On You (Annie Lennox, Luigi Angeloni performs) [3:33] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4h0vRCTUbBU
Look at the background and scene with David Cook's performance... and he did a gut-version of this song.
(music) Billy Jean (David Cook, Am.Idol audition) [4:50] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GZGvgj_y-Ao
With this style of authenticity and intimacy....
(music) My Little Valentine (Alice Fredenham, Britain's Got Talent 2013) [3:17] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CPm9x8i5c_Y
(music) I Put A Spell On You (The Voice, audition, Joe Maye) [5:27] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ApJ0UPR5eqE
I hope we see you in some kind of entertainment audition some day....
Interesting points: What do you thing of a connection that has her pluto square my moon exact, her lilith opposite my venus exact, my lilith conjuncts her eros almost exact, my juno opposite her venus exact, her valentine trines my scorpio stellium on close aspect, and her juno conjuncts my jupiter exact, and her mars conjuncts my venus?.... That's already a lot to handle with the virgo woman... and it's quite a thing to me.
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