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T O P I C R E V I E WLF DXThe gardens are painted in redThe seeds were made with bloodAnd the lion cries for freedomNear the president’s throne The streets are filled with junkWhile people live hidden in trunksAnd the nests are all emptyAnd the clouds are coming soonWhat is left of the northern village?Now that the school’s been burntAnd mothers and children are shot like rabbitsOh policemen, you’ve shot your kinOur race has never risenFrom the ashes of warAnd all that there is nowIs to let the rain fall downmirage29Very powerful imagery, LFDX! Swift Freeze quote:Originally posted by mirage29:Very powerful imagery, LFDX! ------------------Learn lots. Don't judge. Laugh for no reason. Be nice. Seek Happiness. Follow your dreams.AyeletThis poem deciphers the violence of war in a vivid imagery aside more "plain" story telling...pippastrellePowerful imagery, excellent poem!💗Pearlty thequeenVery powerful imagery..Love the way you described the tumult from the point of view of a common man...Randall
The streets are filled with junkWhile people live hidden in trunksAnd the nests are all emptyAnd the clouds are coming soon
What is left of the northern village?Now that the school’s been burntAnd mothers and children are shot like rabbitsOh policemen, you’ve shot your kin
Our race has never risenFrom the ashes of warAnd all that there is nowIs to let the rain fall down
quote:Originally posted by mirage29:Very powerful imagery, LFDX!
------------------Learn lots. Don't judge. Laugh for no reason. Be nice. Seek Happiness. Follow your dreams.
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