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T O P I C R E V I E WAmonuetACT II - DREAMWAKERI steeled my soul in your wake.The confusion I could see,boiling in your blood as you quake.Red is rising in your cheeks,yet still you stand at the door.I feel these soul strings,ripping and tearing at my core.The threads are coiling like snake -a vice grip on my heart!We can't repeat our mistakes -you unearthed these wounds in part!I want to shatter your mirror -leave you broken on the floor.Is that naught where you would like to be?I, the mother-moon,you dream-wake you see?AyeletVery unique.LF DXNow this is quality material, hope this one can be a song. It's going to be amazing.PearltySoul strings and often the involvement thereof-makes for stirring beautiful writing.. Big mirage29 quote:ACT II - DREAMWAKERI steeled my soul in your wake.The confusion I could see,boiling in your blood as you quake.Red is rising in your cheeks,yet still you stand at the door.I feel these soul strings,ripping and tearing at my core.The threads are coiling like snake -a vice grip on my heart!We can't repeat our mistakes -you unearthed these wounds in part!I want to shatter your mirror -leave you broken on the floor.Is that naught where you would like to be?I, the mother-moon,you dream-wake you see?Sounds like you have a Native American type soul (and language) in your work. {{ }}And Welcome Aboard!... (music) Grandmother Moon (Eleanor Daley, Alberta Youth Choir, 2012) [4:15] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DOESP_UccWQ AmonuetWow, I feel so humbled everyone - thank you! I was so nervous about posting my writing, it has been so long. quote: Now this is quality material, hope this one can be a song. It's going to be amazing.I did actually write a version of it for a song! I broke a string on my guitar so I can't wait until I get a new set to restring it, I've just been doing vocals lately and can't test out the beat and feel/hear the melody. quote: omg!!! Quality indeed.And there is a definite vibe and Call .. from a Native American type soul (and language) in your workI am so pleased you enjoyed this piece, I do strongly identify with my indigenous roots. I have a mixed ancestry, but my Cree/Mohawk/Cherokee blood I feel the most. I am very passionate about First Nations culture & spirtiuality and attend many ceremonies up north here. Amonuet quote:(music) Grandmother Moon (Eleanor Daley, Alberta Youth Choir, 2012) [4:15] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DOESP_UccWQ This was so beautiful and haunting! Thank you for sharing. https://youtu.be/ZkZObSr_e7I Higher, by Alejandra Ribera. She is one of my true inspirations. <3 ------------------"And we bleed and barrel down this telescope, I know what I need, I feel your compass guide me."mirage29 quote:Originally posted by Amonuet: http://youtu.be/ZkZObSr_e7I Higher, by Alejandra Ribera. She is one of my true inspirations. <3 I will listen... Thanks!{When you post any url, always remember to remove/delete the letter 's' from "http"... before submitting.}I energized your url that way so people can access your music! mirage29 (music) I Am Orlando (Alejandra Ribera, First Play Live) [5:44] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZoFXXTe_GBw AmonuetThank you so much for fixing that up for me, mirage 69!I hope you enjoyed Alejandra, she has a voice of a true angel. RandallLoves it!
ACT II - DREAMWAKERI steeled my soul in your wake.The confusion I could see,boiling in your blood as you quake.
Red is rising in your cheeks,yet still you stand at the door.I feel these soul strings,ripping and tearing at my core.
The threads are coiling like snake -a vice grip on my heart!We can't repeat our mistakes -you unearthed these wounds in part!
I want to shatter your mirror -leave you broken on the floor.
Is that naught where you would like to be?I, the mother-moon,you dream-wake you see?
Big
quote:ACT II - DREAMWAKERI steeled my soul in your wake.The confusion I could see,boiling in your blood as you quake.Red is rising in your cheeks,yet still you stand at the door.I feel these soul strings,ripping and tearing at my core.The threads are coiling like snake -a vice grip on my heart!We can't repeat our mistakes -you unearthed these wounds in part!I want to shatter your mirror -leave you broken on the floor.Is that naught where you would like to be?I, the mother-moon,you dream-wake you see?
Sounds like you have a Native American type soul (and language) in your work.
{{ }}
And Welcome Aboard!...
(music) Grandmother Moon (Eleanor Daley, Alberta Youth Choir, 2012) [4:15] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DOESP_UccWQ
quote: Now this is quality material, hope this one can be a song. It's going to be amazing.
I did actually write a version of it for a song! I broke a string on my guitar so I can't wait until I get a new set to restring it, I've just been doing vocals lately and can't test out the beat and feel/hear the melody.
quote: omg!!! Quality indeed.And there is a definite vibe and Call .. from a Native American type soul (and language) in your work
quote:(music) Grandmother Moon (Eleanor Daley, Alberta Youth Choir, 2012) [4:15] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DOESP_UccWQ
This was so beautiful and haunting! Thank you for sharing.
https://youtu.be/ZkZObSr_e7I Higher, by Alejandra Ribera. She is one of my true inspirations. <3
------------------"And we bleed and barrel down this telescope, I know what I need, I feel your compass guide me."
quote:Originally posted by Amonuet: http://youtu.be/ZkZObSr_e7I Higher, by Alejandra Ribera. She is one of my true inspirations. <3
She is one of my true inspirations. <3
I will listen... Thanks!
{When you post any url, always remember to remove/delete the letter 's' from "http"... before submitting.}
I energized your url that way so people can access your music!
(music) I Am Orlando (Alejandra Ribera, First Play Live) [5:44] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZoFXXTe_GBw
I hope you enjoyed Alejandra, she has a voice of a true angel.
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