posted June 13, 2004 03:44 AM              

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"Twin-Flame"
How did I hurt you?
What words did I say?
To keep you this long,
And so far away?...

A remembered touch
A remembered smile
A remembered soul
That I held for a while

I can almost feel you...

I can't remember
But I will forgive
what you said to me
That's kept my heart hid...

I will you to me
Like a child at play,
But this is no game
And night has no day

I'm lost and afraid...

Maybe It's just me
Too frightend to fly
That I cling to the earth
Instead of the sky...

And maybe your there
just out of my view,
Soaring and searching,
Should I reach for you?

Here's my hand...
Written by, Charlotte Rose Hamby

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posted June 13, 2004 07:24 AM              

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I can feel something about my own experience through what you've written here...beautiful

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posted June 13, 2004 10:44 AM            

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I feel that the best read poetry is the one you personally vibrate to.
Abstract is nice, but personal is superb!

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posted June 13, 2004 11:42 AM              

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Dana, Thank you! for the reply. I'm one of many, still awaiting the touch of their Twin-Flame...

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posted June 13, 2004 11:51 AM              

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Pikelpixie, Thank you! for your wonderful reply. I agree. Creativity, when matched with your personal vibration is always enlightening...

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posted June 20, 2004 04:23 PM              

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I updated this...When I first posted it,I forgot to use the enter key. What a jumbled mess...Please bear with me, I'm new to the computer world!!!

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posted July 28, 2004 02:10 PM            

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"Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark

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posted July 28, 2004 08:54 PM              

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Thank You! Randall...

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posted September 20, 2004 11:18 AM            

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Penetrating and haunting...I can feel your lonelieness vividly, and definitely relate. Look forward to hearing more of your poetry!

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-K
"Most people love with restraint
As if they were someday to hate
We hated gently, carefully
As if we were someday to love"-Venus Trines at Midnight

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posted October 09, 2004 03:39 AM              

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Awww, Thank You! Virgo-Aries Artist...
I have a few more posted here and am feeling that creative Mojo, so may have another one posted shortly.

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posted October 09, 2004 07:52 AM              

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Just too beautiful for me to express how I find your poem...keep up the good work!

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posted October 12, 2004 03:29 AM              

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Thank you! Eternal Blue, You are a wonderful writer as well.

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posted October 12, 2004 10:33 AM            

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both of u r raelly good!!!!
nice work Chalotte!

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posted October 12, 2004 10:30 PM              

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Thank You! Aqua...

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posted October 13, 2004 06:52 PM              

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Thank you Charlotte for the praise... (I'm still working on it myself) I reckon you really got a gift. Love to read more from you!

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posted October 18, 2004 04:06 AM              

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Thanks!EB, I have four more poems up, 2 are on page 2 and 2 are on page 3. right here in FYWATA...

I will try to get some more up soon, you are very sweet!

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posted September 22, 2011 06:19 AM            

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