posted October 28, 2004 11:47 AM         

I feel a lot of emptiness and I feel alot of pain.
Sometimes I hide inside myself till I think I've gone insane.
I hold a lot of strength and I hold a lot of charm.
I dont mean to hide myself away so you wont cause me any harm.

You are everything I want to be your Everything I want to be.
I dont want to know you anymore, But your all i seem to see.
I am a little weak at times yes i'm A little hard to understand.
If you put some effort into me i could be everything I am.

Night falls through these walls, falls deep into my mind.
When sense is gone, and I cant breathe, I tend to feel so blind.
Hide me away, Into the stars, Cant find me in this hall,
And when you come to bring me down to you I will not fall.

I feel a little more then i should and a little more then you see,
I cant explain even if I tried, I see so much of me.
You are what I dont want to know and your not what I ever want to live,
But I cant keep running through this maze and I have givin all thats left to give.

I wanna fall to you wanna give it up but it's not what i should do,
I feel as if I should keep running even if it's straight to you.
You will not drag me down, you will not gain control,
i'll live my life how I want and you will not take my soul.

Day breakes on this sand, the birds whisper in my ears,
And as your shodaw fades away, this light destroys my fears.
Hidden away, In the sea, cant see me in your eyes,
In the sand, sketched forever, lives your lust and all your lies.

posted October 29, 2004 08:40 AM         

This was my favorite word combination, very expressive and yet also a good example of economy of words. Your poem was very lovely. Hopefully you will continue writing for a very long time to come.

Thank you,

posted November 03, 2004 06:02 AM         

So much lovely poetry in this forum, sometimes think we should have a LL poetry book.