posted January 10, 2019 10:08 AM
Hi Brenda! I like some of the tweaks very much.
Here are some suggestions for you to think about and consider, always to tweak it to what YOU feel reflects your 'hospitality-style' for your shoppers and clients.
Money------
Moving the financial section AFTER people have indulged themselves in viewing your products, and "imagining" owning these items inside their homes and personal belongings (to me) works more effectively.
You want them engaged in "wanting and desiring" your product before hitting their wallets?! *grin*
It's good to engage their Imaginations, having them think HOW they could use your products first.. the money naturally follows.
LOGO AREA ..
I think people should know right away "what" you are about. In that area, perhaps be more obvious? State it somehow?
Don't assume they have guessed what you sell?
You sell Home and Business Décor items (basically).
Also good for Gift-Giving.
{your Guitar kit~~ I wouldn't know how to 'place' as far as décor goes?!! but it's part of astro H2!! things you can possess!!}
Find the words that fit (in general) your "stuff" you sell--
(e.g. right now, you don't sell clothes, dresses, etc.. See what I'm saying? …
What "stuff" would your person be looking for? Décor? .. trying to be more clear here.}
Your first "product" is actually an invisible one--
You are "selling" {hooking} your person who is interested in choosing products by their own styles, and moods {vanity, ego-stroking?}.
Therefore, after your Logo, I would state what you generally sell.. and maybe even Products for "Your Style, Your Moods"
Adjust my idea to what you think fits.
Laughing..
Gently, you present a kind of Aquarian and unique-ness vibe.
Funny thing is, my roommate has an Aquarius Moon. Extremely inward and detached person, while 'seeming' to be friendly open and available. He lives 'in the kingdom and world of his head'.
Aquarius can be kind of maybe too 'detached'?, where they unconsciously assume we can "read what's on their minds!!??" *laughing*
.. Well... ~sometimes I can do that!! rofl
I have a Venus Taurus, and a Virgo Moon. I 'touch-and-feel' and I 'analyze' the things that I-touch-and-feel. That includes advertisements I "see" and "imagine" owning for own myself.
(Of course... there are other things in my chart that facilitate these, and add boosted dimension to these senses.)
Touch and Feel .. directly engaging the Sensory world.
What I see with my 'eyes' and imagination, gives me sense-tactical experiences.
So -----
I would add more 'personal' words to the words you already have there.
Create a subliminal "relationship" with the person attracted to your shopping site. ---
YOUR Style.
YOUR Moods.
YOUR Creative flair
YOUR Genius
.. the words Style, Moods have a sense of 'detachment'. If the *I* and personality can't 'attach' then the shopper will take-it-or-leave-it. {Not trying to hurt your feelings or insult you, okay? It's my "personal" experience and opinion only. YOU know the kind of clientele you wish to draw, according to your OWN moods and styles?}
Style, Moods-- (to me) works once you have established and engaged 'the person' in what you sell.
Indicating that this is about *them* near your Logo, will clarify other words and meanings?
{See how that adds more of a *I'm here to "show you" imaginative Possibilities*, and to cater to your individual unique {flattering them} "tastes" {implying they have 'good tastes'} kind-of-a-vibe? You're their invisible 'shopping concierge', or the Stylist who Knows them??.. haha.
You are there to provide them with "an experience" they will love and come back for, for themselves or for gift-giving to others.
You accompany/lead them to their various moods, according to which Style they are attracted to. And of course, they feel self-empowered and engaged.
{I'm smiling, as I'm thinking of some of the shows my roommate watches. He loves those real-estate shows. The renovation stylist, or million-dollar home seller, approaches their client with suggestions they feel 'match' the clients they want to contract with.}
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SECTION
Know-it-all, Dabbler ---------
suggestion..
add the word "The"
The Know-it-all
The Dabbler
Your Style
fitting what Your Moods
are about...
{See where I'm going with this? *heart*}
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Shop -----
{possibly, replace with something like}
"What's Your Style?"
{engages them in a personal way}
"The Know-it-All"
"The Dabbler"
uhm. To be direct with you (personally for me)?
I had the 'tendency' to want to skip that, and cut to the section of your pretty 'boxed' sections where you have the 'Shopping Moods'. I LIKE the choice of descriptive "words" you used FOR those sections.
{note how I suggest adding a more-active voice to that verb 'Shop Moods'.}
… Either would work?! LOL
.. ~oy!!! ha. Maybe I'm getting too detail-oriented right now. I should back off a bit??
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50% discount
.. oh yeah baby!!! NOW you have me!!!!! *laughing*
I LIKE the kind of 'understating' of this.
Their "seeing" that they can have the chance of 'half-off' the purchase of your products (which they have just ALREADY-"imagined" owning for themselves, seeing self 'owing' it, and have dickered in their head with your listed prices), provides an energy-stress release.. it unblocks a dam, suddenly?
You know how you used icons with your check-mark section??
I would add a kind of attractive one after bolding and saying "50% discount".
Style Shop
50% Discounts
then the info how-to.
p.s. … I KNOW you get your own pun on "over-slowing" with Toy??
To me?, that is so awkward.
My mind LOVES LOVES LOVES humor and puns.
I have a hard time solving that one!! rofl
That tiny room--- OMG!!! It's sooo cute!!!
What a MARVELOUS little gift that could be to a growing girl!
And, I know there are miniature-enthusiasts out there {older people} who like to collect those kinds of things.
That's a fantastic "little world" .. {congratulations!}
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Okay. I'm getting tired now, and have "too much" I'd want to say???
Under "About Us" ---
VERY NICE colorful listing!! YES!
Consider making these "clickable"..
I would almost change the words About Us to something like {Menu} Your Choices .. (but, maybe, more creative word?? ..
I LOVE the look and feel of that colorful list!
Well!! LOL
I'll let you mull-over some of those ideas, and see what you would wish to incorporate or not.
I think it's exciting that you are expressing yourself with this unique project!
{congratulations}
Stylish LL Woman Entrepreneur…. ((YES!!!!)) *grin*
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Link to your first thread--
Marketing based on astrological placements
December 29, 2018 7:58 p.m.
- http://www.linda-goodman.com/ubb/Forum24/HTML/240271.html