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future_uncertain
Knowflake Posts: 3226
From: ohio
Registered: Aug 2004
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posted November 23, 2005 03:41 PM
 
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lotusheartone
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posted November 23, 2005 03:44 PM
No worries!That girl has a heart of gold thanks for sharing IP: Logged |
pixelpixie
Knowflake Posts: 5492
From: Ontario Canada
Registered: Jun 2005
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posted November 23, 2005 04:32 PM
WOW!!!!What a great story/poem.
Makes my heart sad.  IP: Logged |
teaselbaby
Knowflake Posts: 1488
From: Northeast Ohio
Registered: Sep 2002
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posted November 23, 2005 04:54 PM
This is beautiful, and flows so well. IP: Logged |
26taurus
Knowflake Posts: 16283
From: *
Registered: Jun 2004
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posted November 24, 2005 01:15 AM
Futuuuure. How did you know? ..... Some of the lines in this, gave me chills. You have such talent. I really love this poem.  Thank you for sharing. IP: Logged |
sweetlibra
Knowflake Posts: 1382
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Registered: Oct 2004
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posted November 24, 2005 07:00 AM
That girl never had a chance
with her curious eyes
and wild heart.
She said somebody’s got to save that boy,
but she lost that game before she could start.
sounds like my story with the sag!IP: Logged |
sweetlibra
Knowflake Posts: 1382
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Registered: Oct 2004
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posted November 24, 2005 07:03 AM
Future it is amazing IP: Logged |
future_uncertain
Knowflake Posts: 3226
From: ohio
Registered: Aug 2004
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posted November 25, 2005 09:02 PM
Your compliments mean so much to me! This one took longer to write than usual, and when I was done I was disappointed. Ever have that happen... when you know what you want to write and it just doesn't come out the way you had planned?Usually, those are the ones that people like the best, and when I write something I really love, it seems no one else likes it! HaHa! I hear this happens a lot with writers...  Thanks a bunch! IP: Logged |
leo_on_fire
Knowflake Posts: 422
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Registered: Dec 2004
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posted November 25, 2005 10:14 PM
WOWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!------------------
Live your life without regret, don't be someone they forget. Your heart is not yours to keep, it's yours to give... Unknown IP: Logged |
aqua
Knowflake Posts: 2805
From: dreamland
Registered: Jan 2004
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posted November 26, 2005 01:39 AM
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Lindaland
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