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broken dream
Knowflake

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From: charlotte nc. us
Registered: Sep 2008

posted February 25, 2009 11:02 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for broken dream     Edit/Delete Message
Touched her left cheek you know i love you right? i asked what you think she smell like? she said like a ghost! Too much anger in her voice she reminds me of passion lost found and remembered you think he love her? kinda hard to love a ghost why should you care he aint thinkin bout you. I wanted to ask why... why you always have to kill my buzz with truth i found my own passion made her remember i use to be you way back when,when we slumbered inside loves innocence.

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broken dream
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From: charlotte nc. us
Registered: Sep 2008

posted February 25, 2009 11:14 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for broken dream     Edit/Delete Message
She said yeah and now you hate me as much as you love death. Come on baby dont be like that get me another shot. offers me a cup of truth too strong for me to swallow. You let go of him im throwing up denial she wants to know when was the last time i was sober? shes trying to make me remember im trying desperately to forget. I use to be beautiful way back when... when its too late for me too late for him and god knows its too late for us! drunken smile broken with laughter

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MysticMelody
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posted February 25, 2009 04:39 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for MysticMelody     Edit/Delete Message
"offers me a cup of truth too strong for me to swallow"

that is an outstanding line

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Pearlty
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posted February 26, 2009 07:48 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Pearlty     Edit/Delete Message
Broken Dream~ I read your story..which I'm sure isn't finished yet..but

It's different I like it...that first line about picking up the phone and wanting to talk to Jesus, I can understand that reference.

It is hard to love a ghost, how true; I have loved one, my entire life...and I've had my buzz killed many times with truth also...

Thanks, I love when I read something, that makes me ponder...my own depths.

Bless you..

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