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Topic: Bottom part 2
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broken dream Knowflake Posts: 63 From: charlotte nc. us Registered: Sep 2008
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posted February 25, 2009 11:02 AM
Touched her left cheek you know i love you right? i asked what you think she smell like? she said like a ghost! Too much anger in her voice she reminds me of passion lost found and remembered you think he love her? kinda hard to love a ghost why should you care he aint thinkin bout you. I wanted to ask why... why you always have to kill my buzz with truth i found my own passion made her remember i use to be you way back when,when we slumbered inside loves innocence.IP: Logged |
broken dream Knowflake Posts: 63 From: charlotte nc. us Registered: Sep 2008
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posted February 25, 2009 11:14 AM
She said yeah and now you hate me as much as you love death. Come on baby dont be like that get me another shot. offers me a cup of truth too strong for me to swallow. You let go of him im throwing up denial she wants to know when was the last time i was sober? shes trying to make me remember im trying desperately to forget. I use to be beautiful way back when... when its too late for me too late for him and god knows its too late for us! drunken smile broken with laughter IP: Logged |
MysticMelody Moderator Posts: 5037 From: Registered: Dec 2005
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posted February 25, 2009 04:39 PM
"offers me a cup of truth too strong for me to swallow"that is an outstanding line IP: Logged |
Pearlty Knowflake Posts: 482 From: Registered: Nov 2006
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posted February 26, 2009 07:48 AM
Broken Dream~ I read your story..which I'm sure isn't finished yet..butIt's different I like it...that first line about picking up the phone and wanting to talk to Jesus, I can understand that reference. It is hard to love a ghost, how true; I have loved one, my entire life...and I've had my buzz killed many times with truth also... Thanks, I love when I read something, that makes me ponder...my own depths. Bless you.. IP: Logged |