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Ayelet
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posted April 05, 2018 01:39 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Ayelet     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Come and Shine

When mother asked where,
She was as pure as snow,
and delicate and warm
as the Easter bunny.

"I am not made of chocolate," she said,
"but you couldn't tell the difference."

And as she walked wherever,
she shed her peels, her nourishing peels,
and remained a naked portrait,
one step away from being real.
"It is the passing of the seasons,
all these non senses,"
she said and fainted in my bed.

Now I look to the sky
to see her at night.
Her glamour will never disappoint,
She is as devastating as Spring,
and naturally so,
though if it wasn't for her fainting,
I probably wouldn't have noticed.

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Randall
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posted April 06, 2018 01:48 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Childlike wonder!

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Randall
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posted April 07, 2018 07:28 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
With a hint of sadness. Brilliant.

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mirage29
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posted April 07, 2018 08:25 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for mirage29     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
I want to say that this poem overall is very 'sweet' ?

AND, as I know you are a deep person,
like Randall was saying...
a hint of bitter-sweetness haunts so very lightly.

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Ayelet
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posted April 08, 2018 09:43 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Ayelet     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Thank you guy and lady

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Randall
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posted April 09, 2018 11:30 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
I love it.

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Pearlty
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posted April 12, 2018 08:37 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Pearlty     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote

Lighthearted feel to this, yet positively intricate

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Ayelet
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posted April 16, 2018 02:40 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Ayelet     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Thanks Pearly

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Randall
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posted May 24, 2018 07:26 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Bump!

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