|
Author
|
Topic: Poetry in Motion- add a line
|
SunChild
Moderator Posts: 4032
From: Australia
Registered: Jan 2004
|
posted October 13, 2005 05:28 AM
 
I posted this here because I'm hoping more knowflakes will contribute. This is Poetry in motion; where we all write a line, or two, three or four, one after the other keeping a rhyme and meter going all the way through (if possible.)  Just try it, I'll start with a few random lines.
Try to rhyme if you can, doesn't matter if the meter changes, or it gets wierd... You don't have to rhyme off the previous post either, there really is no rules. Here goes:
-------------------- Poetry in motion
is finding words that rhyme
let your thoughts go round'n round
or line by line
an idea first
then a rhyme [continue]
IP: Logged |
peajie
Knowflake Posts: 246
From: Australia
Registered: Aug 2005
|
posted October 13, 2005 07:37 AM
"Poetry in motion
is finding words that rhyme
let your thoughts go round'n round
or line by line
an idea first
then a rhyme....."But my head is empty,
the pen is still.
Makes me feel such a dill.
When all thoughts fly away,
and nothing worthwhile will stay.
Perhaps I don't exist?
But I will persist,
and try another day. IP: Logged |
aqua
Knowflake Posts: 2805
From: dreamland
Registered: Jan 2004
|
posted October 13, 2005 08:31 AM
"Poetry in motion
is finding words that rhyme
let your thoughts go round'n round
or line by line
an idea first
then a rhyme....."
But my head is empty,
the pen is still.
Makes me feel such a dill.
When all thoughts fly away,
and nothing worthwhile will stay.
Perhaps I don't exist?
But I will persist,
and try another day.
that another day is here,
and my mind's acting wierd,
my brain moves round n round
but no thoughts are to be found,
oh! what a tragedy!
will i be able to break free?
IP: Logged |
26taurus
Knowflake Posts: 13411
From: *
Registered: Jun 2004
|
posted October 13, 2005 04:03 PM
Or will I be able to break a dollar?
A dime a dozen, in a blue collar.
Woe is me, all pennilessly.
Given two 'sense',
rub it together.
Stop hiding under the couch cushions.IP: Logged |
SunChild
Moderator Posts: 4032
From: Australia
Registered: Jan 2004
|
posted October 13, 2005 09:15 PM
Before you sneeze,
and begin to wheeze...
It's better to be oozing illusions,
A rambling mystic.IP: Logged |
SunChild
Moderator Posts: 4032
From: Australia
Registered: Jan 2004
|
posted October 13, 2005 09:22 PM
dpIP: Logged |
lotusheartone
Knowflake Posts: 238
From: MOther & Father GOd
Registered: Feb 2008
|
posted October 13, 2005 09:23 PM
no more delusions
rainbows ahead
magical mystical creation
abounds, not dreadIP: Logged |
SunChild
Moderator Posts: 4032
From: Australia
Registered: Jan 2004
|
posted October 14, 2005 04:16 AM
And I see on the horizon
A nice coushy bed
Where I will sleep
And rest my spinning, tired, head.IP: Logged |
peajie
Knowflake Posts: 246
From: Australia
Registered: Aug 2005
|
posted October 14, 2005 09:25 AM
Sunchild..starts a rhyme
for us to add a line at a time.Aqua reveals a weird mind
.. her brains in a grind. 26Taurus, more commercial in thought
thinks with money rhymes can be bought. Sunchild returns with a cold
and lines which a rhyme do not hold. Lotusheartone
... links money to the rainbows bend
perhaps in a pot at the end ? Sunchild, unable to let it rest
returns again with thoughts of her nest. peajie just pops in and out,
like a pig following his snout. IP: Logged |
SunChild
Moderator Posts: 4032
From: Australia
Registered: Jan 2004
|
posted October 14, 2005 09:56 AM
ha ha ha peajie's lost it
and I'm out of bed
all I'm wondering now
is where peajies snout will be led
IP: Logged |
Rainbow~
Knowflake Posts: 5927
From: The Little River Indian Reservation
Registered: Jan 2002
|
posted October 15, 2005 02:44 AM
 Twinkle, twinkle, little star
Knowflakes here, from near and far
Some be girls and some be boys
Some be quiet, some make noise,
Some be left, and some be right,
Sometimes knowflakes even fight!  But mostly knowflakes embrace love,  Whether hawk
or peaceful dove We knowflakes make a spiritual stand
Here in knowflake Linda Land Merging knowflakes, through the air 
Fluttering here and fluttering there,
Flying knowflake cyber elves  With special "names" to hide our S(elves) As we soar
with our magic wands
We form a
mingling Knowflake bond 
IP: Logged |
lotusheartone
Knowflake Posts: 238
From: MOther & Father GOd
Registered: Feb 2008
|
posted October 15, 2005 02:53 AM
Rainbow~ s words are so beautiful
and her pictures too!
She's like a butterfly
I wonder, a gemini?IP: Logged |
Rainbow~
Knowflake Posts: 5927
From: The Little River Indian Reservation
Registered: Jan 2002
|
posted October 15, 2005 03:03 AM
Not a Gemini, lotusheartone - but I have the Sun, Mercury and Jupiter in the Gemini third house....I'm a Capricorn Sun
Pisces Moon
Scorpio Rising ....and thank you for the kind words....   IP: Logged |
sue g
Knowflake Posts: 8591
From: former land of the leprechaun
Registered: Sep 2004
|
posted October 15, 2005 03:52 AM
Ooooh Rainbow your Pisces moon doth shineth thro.....lovely words and lovely images  IP: Logged |
Bluemoon
Knowflake Posts: 4456
From: Stafford, VA USA
Registered: Feb 2005
|
posted October 15, 2005 04:09 PM
If this poetry will continue
Depends on you and I
Write some rhyming words, now Soogie
At least give it a try.IP: Logged |
SunChild
Moderator Posts: 4032
From: Australia
Registered: Jan 2004
|
posted October 15, 2005 08:55 PM
Sooogie began to rhyme
that I surely saw
but now lets continue
and walk through the doorIP: Logged |
Rainbow~
Knowflake Posts: 5927
From: The Little River Indian Reservation
Registered: Jan 2002
|
posted October 15, 2005 09:06 PM
I tried to rhyme,
I really did,
But if I goofed
of me - get rid...(ps...thanx, Sue) IP: Logged |
lotusheartone
Knowflake Posts: 238
From: MOther & Father GOd
Registered: Feb 2008
|
posted October 15, 2005 11:33 PM
You welcome Rainbow~
sister of tranquility
And Earth for sure
Love is our cure... ...IP: Logged |
Saturn's Child
Knowflake Posts: 867
From: Just left of center
Registered: May 2004
|
posted October 16, 2005 12:31 AM
Time for a rhyme?
Well, how sublime!How very clever
Did you ever
Think you would
find So many who could Turn a phrase so witty
Or spin a little ditty?  IP: Logged |
SunChild
Moderator Posts: 4032
From: Australia
Registered: Jan 2004
|
posted October 16, 2005 01:01 AM
did i forget to mention a poem by Rainbow?
I think she did a heart felt job
and there's no real reason to sob
She should stay
and make it a colorful day.IP: Logged |
Rainbow~
Knowflake Posts: 5927
From: The Little River Indian Reservation
Registered: Jan 2002
|
posted October 16, 2005 01:54 AM
Okay, okayI'll stay, I'll stay I'm here for keeps (I hope and pray) IP: Logged |
lotusheartone
Knowflake Posts: 238
From: MOther & Father GOd
Registered: Feb 2008
|
posted October 16, 2005 02:17 AM
for a new day
is dawning, of understanding
we are all one
and one for allIP: Logged |
leoelf
Knowflake Posts: 574
From: In My Head
Registered: May 2005
|
posted October 16, 2005 04:10 AM
It should always be that simple.Your heart in mine. Fingers of the world. Intertwined. IP: Logged |
Bluemoon
Knowflake Posts: 4456
From: Stafford, VA USA
Registered: Feb 2005
|
posted October 16, 2005 10:50 AM
Sweet Sisters, it's a lovely day
I could not love you more, no way!
I don't come to see your rhymes
I just enjoy the happy times!
Rainbow has such lovely hues,
Soogie with her magic views,
Sunchild, with her eyes wide open,
And I Bluemoon, continue cope'n!
I don't want to leave any out!
For all the rest, a GREAT BIG SHOUT!
I think about you every day!
In this place I love to play!IP: Logged |
sue g
Knowflake Posts: 8591
From: former land of the leprechaun
Registered: Sep 2004
|
posted October 16, 2005 11:04 AM
Oh Blue, oh Blue
i just have to say
you are a sweet one
in every way.....
and if i could, you
know I would
sweep you up
and whisk you
away........  IP: Logged |
Lindaland
UBBFriend: Email This Page to Someone! 
