posted March 14, 2012 07:52 AM            

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Originally posted by Monica:
Hello,
Lexx I used some additional words again to complete this lexigram.I would really appreciate it if you could help me correct this one too.I just started lexigramming five days ago.I am just an amateur and I really need your guidance.

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Your creation is:
HEART ATTACK
HATE TEAR(S) THE HEART (OF) HATER
HECK TEACH(ES) HATE
RHEA HEAR(S) THE HATE
RHEA TRACKS THE HATER
TEAR(S) THE HATER

By adding an S to ATTACK...,
making it ATTACKS,
Your creation with two errors in bold/italics;
becomes this:
HEART ATTACK
HATE TEARS THE HEART (OF) HATER
HECK TEACH(ES) HATE
RHEA HEARS THE HATE
RHEA TRACKS THE HATER
TEARS THE HATER

So now we only need to deal with
(OF)
and
TEACH(ES)

So we take the line;
HATE TEARS THE HEART (OF) HATER
and drop the word "OF",
and add the word "AT"
and change it to:
HATE TEARS AT THE HATER'S HEART
and to fix this line:
HECK TEACH(ES) HATE
change to for now (looking for a better phrase)
drop the "ES", add a question mark.;
HECK,
TEACH HATE?

or;
TEACH HATE?
HECK!

So you get with fixes,
With a few added valid words/letters
such as;
SHE, AT, ATTACKS, etc,
Your creation then becomes
an actual ERROR FREE Lexigram!

The phrase;
HEART ATTACKS
Lexigrams to:

HEART ATTACKS!
HATE TEARS AT THE HATER'S HEART
TEACH HATE?
HECK!
RHEA HEARS THE HATE,
RHEA TRACKS THE HATER.
SHE TEARS AT THE HATER'S HEART.
ATTACKS THE HATER'S HEART.

Other words from the phrase;
HEART ATTACKS
(as you can see, much more to work with here)

Please consider looking these words over so that you can add more to your creation if you wish!
LOL!
Of course most of the words are not useful for the topic of Heart Attacks,
but some could be.

HEART ATTACKS

ATTACKERS CHATTERS REATTACH CASTRATE ATTRACTS ATTACHES ATTACKER RATCHETS ATTACHE STRETCH TATTERS KARATE TACKERS SHATTER HACKERS TRACHEA ARCHEST CHASTER SCATTER HATTERS CHATTER ATTACKS RACKETS THREATS ATTRACT RATCHET TARTEST TETRAS EARTHS THETAS TRACES ATTACK REACTS RACKET TATTER CHEATS TATERS HATTER TRACTS TASTER KARATS CREAKS CHASTE CATERS STARCH CHARTS TRACKS THREAT ATTEST CHASER CASKET ARCHES ATTACH TREATS CASTER RECAST KARATE TACKER SEARCH HEARTS STREAK STRATA SCATHE SKETCH SACHET SKATER CRATES SHAKER HACKER HATERS TAKERS CARATS STARK STEAK SHEAR ATTAR TREAT TECHS SHARK TAKES TREKS CARAT START HACKS HASTE CHASE CASTE CATER ACRES RACKS KARTS SKATE TRACT TETRA STARE CRATE CARTS TATER SACRA CHERT HEART CARET RHEAS STATE RETCH SHAKE HARKS SHARE TRASH TEATS STAKE REACT REACH TEARS CREAK RATES ACHES CHARS CHATS STACK HARES RAKES CHEAT SHACK SCARE TACKS ASTER CARES RACES HATER KETCH TEAKS CHART TASTE THETA TRACE KARAT TRACK TARTS CAKES EARTH HAKES HEATS AREAS TACT CREST HEARS CHEST TEACH CRASH HARTS TAKER HATES TARES RHEA TAKE STAR CHAR HAST RACE TACT REST ACRE HARK RASH HATS CASE TARE ARES TECH HERS TACK ETCH RATE ACHE ERAS ARTS ARCS EATS TEAS SEAR CARE EARS HAKE EACH HATE RATS SCAR SATE TREK HART CAST SACK RAKE TEAT CART HEAT CHAT TASK RACK TART TARS KART ACES TEAK CATS ARKS SEAT HARE EAST AREA HECK ARCH SCAT CASK CASH TEAR SAKE CAKE CARS HACK ACTS THAT HEAR SECT TEST ART TA RAT CAR RAH SET EAR TEA CAT ATE TAR ASK ASH AHA ERA ARK HAS SHE SEA ARE SAT THE EAT HAT ARC ACT HER ACE AS HA HE AH AT RA EH A

Going with the singular ATTACK,
then HEART ATTACK
has these words:

REATTACH ATTACKER RATCHET CHATTER TRACHEA ATTRACT ATTACHE TATTER HACKER THREAT ATTACH RACKET HATTER TACKER KARATE ATTACK CARET HEART TATER TRACK CHEAT TEACH CARAT TAKER TRACT TRACE TREAT THETA KETCH RETCH CHART ATTAR EARTH REACT REACH CREAK TETRA CATER CRATE KARAT HATER CHERT RHEA RACK TARE CART CARE RATE HEAT TEAR HEAR HARE TECH HECK HATE KART HART RACE TACK RAKE TACT HACK ARCH ETCH CHAT CAKE CHAR TREK TART ACRE EACH AREA TAKE HARK THAT TEAT ACHE TEAK HAKE TEA EAT ACT EAR CAR ERA RAH ARC RAT THE CAT HAT ATE ACE ART ARK AHA ARE HER TAR RA AH EH HE HA AT A

posted March 14, 2012 08:51 AM            

To ANY of these longer phrases;
ANY of them will render your original creation to being an error free actual Lexigram!

STORY OF HEART ATTACK (word count approx.985+)
or
STORY OF A HEART ATTACK (word count approx.985+)
or
SAGA OF HEART ATTACK (word count approx.750)
or
SAGA OF A HEART ATTACK (word count approx.750+)
or a longer phrase;
HEART ATTACKS OR CARDIAC FAILURES (word count approx 6,500+)

That would make your original creation become,
without doing any changes,
an actual error free Lexigram.All those listed phrases will
Lexigram to you original creation:

HEART ATTACK
HATE TEARS THE HEART OF HATER
HECK TEACHES HATE
RHEA HEARS THE HATE
RHEA TRACKS THE HATER
TEARS THE HATER
However it would also give you considerably more words to work with to create a very long detailed error free actual Lexigram.
For example just for starters,
By adding more valid words:
HEART ATTACK
HATE TEARS AT THE HEART OF THE HATER
HECK IT TEACHES HATE
RHEA HEARS THE HATE
RHEA TRACKS THE HATER
ATTACKS HE OR SHE
TEARS AT THEIR HATER HEARTS

A few ANAGRAMS
of the phrase;
HEART ATTACKS
=
ATTACKS HATER
or
HATER ATTACKS
or
HATERS ATTACK
or
ATTACK HATERS
or
STACK A THREAT
or
ATTACKS AT HER

quote:

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car·di·ac (kärd-k)
adj.
1. Of, near, or relating to the heart: cardiac arteries.
2. Of or relating to the cardia.
n.
A person with a heart disorder.

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posted March 15, 2012 09:09 AM            

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Originally posted by Monica:
Thanks Lexx,
You're a genius.I will surely try all the other things which you have recommended.If I try more then maybe i'll get the hang of it.

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I will help you as much as you desire.

You can learn how!
Feel free to ask ANY questions!
There is no such thing as a stupid question!
So ask ask ask!

posted March 16, 2012 11:53 AM            

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posted March 26, 2012 10:00 AM            

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posted January 01, 2013 10:48 AM            

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Originally posted by Randall:
Good stuff!

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